雅思考官看了想打人的雅思寫作開頭大盤點

原標(biāo)題：雅思考官看了想打人的雅思寫作開頭，你中了幾條？

1、中式英語

用中式英文開頭，不僅會讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語言功底，語料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。比如：

寫作主題：The happiest moment in your life

案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…

寫作主題：The population problem

案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

2、胡亂翻譯中國俗語

胡亂翻譯中國俗語會起反作用，畢竟考官對中國俗語并不“感冒”，使用不慎，更會引起考官反感。比如：

寫作主題：Is it good to have a large family?

案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”…

寫作主題：Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

案例：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole…

3、敘事啰嗦

開篇要主題清晰，上來啰啰嗦嗦表達(dá)不清，考官自然認(rèn)為你的觀點模糊，甚至不會表達(dá)。比如：

寫作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

寫作主題：Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

雅思考官看了想打人的雅思寫作開頭，你中了幾條？！

4、偏離主題

文不對題自然會扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫作分?jǐn)?shù)還會高么？比如：

寫作主題：It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

5、觀點不明朗

雅思大作文很重要的一點就是你的邏輯性和觀點，如果觀點都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會缺乏說服力，自然分?jǐn)?shù)也不會高。比如：

寫作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……